Directions: Identify the elements of style that have been underlined in the followingpassages. Elements may be used more than once. Once you have identified the elements ofstyle that have been used in each excerpt, explain the effect that these stylistic techniqueshave on the reader. An example has been done for you.factual tone symbolism sensory imagesfirst person point of view repetition sentence fragmentsunusual proper nouns precise word choice descriptive vocabularyEx. It was very startling (A); but he was not at all frightened, now. He was filled withenergy, and he breathed again, feeling the sharp intake of frigid air (B). Now, too, hecould feel cold air swirling around his entire body (C). He felt it blow against his handswhere they lay at his sides, and over his back.Elements of style: A. precise word choice; B. sensory image, descriptive vocabulary; C.sensory imageEffect: The author begins the description with the strong word “startling” and not justthe word “scary.” The description includes sensory images which allow the reader to feelthe frigid air that Jonas experiences, helping to create an image in the reader’s mind.1. Finally the obstruction of the piled snow was too much for the thin runners of the sled,and he came to a stop. He sat there for a moment, panting, holding the rope (A) in hiscold hands. Tentatively (B) he opened his eyes – not his snow-hill-sled eyes (C), for theyhad been open throughout the strange ride. He opened his ordinary eyes, and saw that hewas still on the bed, that he had not moved at all.Elements of style: A. B.C.Name _________________________________________ Period ___________© 2008 Secondary Solutions 60 The Giver Literature GuideEffect:2. “And hills, too,” he added. “They made conveyance of goods unwieldy. (A) Trucks;buses. Slowed them down. So—” (B) He waved his hand, as if a gesture had caused hillsto disappear. “Sameness,” he concluded.Elements of style: A. B.Effect:3. He was left, upon awakening, with the feeling that he wanted, even somehow needed, toreach the something that waited in the distance. The feeling that it was good. (A) That itwas welcoming. That it was significant. (B)Elements of style: A. B.Effect:4. “Oh, there’s lots to learn,” Fiona replied. “There’s administrative work, and the dietaryrules, and punishment for disobedience (A) – did you know that they use a disciplinewand on the Old (B), the same as for small children? And there’s occupational therapy,and recreational activities, and medications, and—”Elements of style: A. B.Effect:
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Directions: Identify the elements of style that have been underlined in the followingpassages. Elements may be used more than once. Once you have identified the elements ofstyle that have been used in each excerpt, explain the effect that these stylistic techniqueshave on the reader. An example has been done for you.factual tone symbolism sensory imagesfirst person point of view repetition sentence fragmentsunusual proper nouns precise word choice descriptive vocabularyEx. It was very startling (A); but he was not at all frightened, now. He was filled withenergy, and he breathed again, feeling the sharp intake of frigid air (B). Now, too, hecould feel cold air swirling around his entire body (C). He felt it blow against his handswhere they lay at his sides, and over his back.Elements of style: A. precise word choice; B. sensory image, descriptive vocabulary; C.sensory imageEffect: The author begins the description with the strong word “startling” and not justthe word “scary.” The description includes sensory images which allow the reader to feelthe frigid air that Jonas experiences, helping to create an image in the reader’s mind.1. Finally the obstruction of the piled snow was too much for the thin runners of the sled,and he came to a stop. He sat there for a moment, panting, holding the rope (A) in hiscold hands. Tentatively (B) he opened his eyes – not his snow-hill-sled eyes (C), for theyhad been open throughout the strange ride. He opened his ordinary eyes, and saw that hewas still on the bed, that he had not moved at all.Elements of style: A. B.C.Name _________________________________________ Period ___________© 2008 Secondary Solutions 60 The Giver Literature GuideEffect:2. “And hills, too,” he added. “They made conveyance of goods unwieldy. (A) Trucks;buses. Slowed them down. So—” (B) He waved his hand, as if a gesture had caused hillsto disappear. “Sameness,” he concluded.Elements of style: A. B.Effect:3. He was left, upon awakening, with the feeling that he wanted, even somehow needed, toreach the something that waited in the distance. The feeling that it was good. (A) That itwas welcoming. That it was significant. (B)Elements of style: A. B.Effect:4. “Oh, there’s lots to learn,” Fiona replied. “There’s administrative work, and the dietaryrules, and punishment for disobedience (A) – did you know that they use a disciplinewand on the Old (B), the same as for small children? And there’s occupational therapy,and recreational activities, and medications, and—”Elements of style: A. B.Effect:
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Elements of style: A. descriptive vocabulary, sensory image; B. precise word choice; C. unusual proper nouns Effect: The author uses descriptive vocabulary and sensory images to create a vivid picture of the protagonist's struggle with the snow. The precise word choice "tentatively" suggests his uncertainty or fear. The unusual proper nouns "snow-hill-sled eyes" and "ordinary eyes" differentiate between his extraordinary experience and his normal life, adding a layer of complexity to his character.
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Elements of style: A. unusual proper nouns; B. sentence fragments Effect: The unusual proper noun "conveyance of goods unwieldy" gives a formal, bureaucratic tone to the speaker's words, suggesting his authority or official position. The sentence fragments "Trucks; buses. Slowed them down. So—" create a choppy rhythm that reflects the speaker's dismissive attitude towards the old ways.
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Elements of style: A. repetition; B. sentence fragments Effect: The repetition of "the feeling that" emphasizes the protagonist's strong desire or need to reach his goal. The sentence fragments "That it was good. That it was welcoming. That it was significant." create a rhythmic pattern that reinforces this emphasis and also conveys the protagonist's certainty about the positive nature of his goal.
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Elements of style: A. first person point of view; B. unusual proper nouns Effect: The first person point of view allows the reader to understand Fiona's perspective and her role in the society. The unusual proper noun "discipline wand" suggests a method of punishment that is unique to this society, adding to the reader's understanding of its rules and norms.
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