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Within the academic context, what is wrong with the register of the following sentence?We as South Africans that are living here in South Africa will have to think long and deep about our precious future before it is over and done with.  A. It makes use of everyday language and is wordy. B. It is overly subjective and makes use of the passive voice. C. Pronouns like "us" may never be used in academic texts. D. It is repetitive, emotional, and there is a lack of logic.

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Within the academic context, what is wrong with the register of the following sentence?We as South Africans that are living here in South Africa will have to think long and deep about our precious future before it is over and done with.  A. It makes use of everyday language and is wordy. B. It is overly subjective and makes use of the passive voice. C. Pronouns like "us" may never be used in academic texts. D. It is repetitive, emotional, and there is a lack of logic.

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The sentence "We as South Africans that are living here in South Africa will have to think long and deep about our precious future before it is over and done with" is problematic within an academic context for several reasons.

Option A: It makes use of everyday language and is wordy. This is partially correct. The sentence is indeed wordy and could be more concise. However, everyday language is not necessarily a problem in academic writing as long as it is clear and precise.

Option B: It is overly subjective and makes use of the passive voice. This is not entirely correct. The sentence is subjective, but it does not use the passive voice. The passive voice would involve the subject being acted upon by the verb, which is not the case here.

Option C: Pronouns like "us" may never be used in academic texts. This is incorrect. Pronouns can be used in academic writing, although it is often encouraged to use third person pronouns to maintain a formal tone.

Option D: It is repetitive, emotional, and there is a lack of logic. This is the most accurate option. The sentence is repetitive ("South Africans" and "living here in South Africa"), emotional ("our precious future"), and lacks a clear logical progression.

Therefore, the best answer is D. It is repetitive, emotional, and there is a lack of logic.

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