Marvin walked along the shadowy sidewalk quickly. Suddenly, he heard the crack of a twig behind him. He turns around to see someone was following him. A chill ran down his spine.Which of these revisions corrects the inappropriate shift in verb tense?A.He turned around to seeB.someone is following himC.he was hearing the crackD.A chill runs down his spine
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Marvin walked along the shadowy sidewalk quickly. Suddenly, he heard the crack of a twig behind him. He turns around to see someone was following him. A chill ran down his spine.Which of these revisions corrects the inappropriate shift in verb tense?A.He turned around to seeB.someone is following himC.he was hearing the crackD.A chill runs down his spine
Solution
The correct revision to correct the inappropriate shift in verb tense is A. "He turned around to see". This change corrects the shift from past tense to present tense in the original sentence.
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