Question 28 BOOKMARKWhich revision to sentence 12 is best suited for the intended audience?Answer choices for the above questionWhen the women were arrested, many began a hunger strike, which authorities attempted to end with force-feedings.When the women were arrested, they began a hunger strike; these women were then subjected to gavage, or enteral feeding.When the women were arrested, they stopped eating to protest what was happening; the people in charge then tried to make them eat.When the women were arrested, many responded with a hunger strike, an extreme reaction that local authorities rightly attempted to put a stop to, by demanding that the women eat.

Which revision to sentence 14 is best suited for the intended audience?Answer choices for the above questionIn 1920, the combined effect of moderate and militant actions gave women the right to vote with the passing of the Nineteenth Amendment.In 1920, the actions of both groups gave women the right to vote, because that’s when the Nineteenth Amendment to the Constitution was passed.In 1920, both groups working together led to the Nineteenth Amendment to the United States Constitution being passed: you women can now vote because of it!In 1920, the combinatory aftermath of both moderate and militant suffragist pressures evolved into the ratification of the Nineteenth Amendment, granting women the license to vote.

Directions for questions 1 to 5: In each question, there are five sentences or parts of sentences that form a paragraph. Identify the sentence(s) or part(s) of sentence(s) that is/are correct in terms of grammar and usage. Then, choose the most appropriate option.a.  The shocking denial of access to basic facilities at the village level institutionalizes inequality of opportunity and has prevented the poor from rising.b.  Urban facilities provide some social mobility.c.  But rural facilities are so typically pathetic as to become poverty traps.d.  For this, our politicians are squarely to blame for these heroes are the zeroes who ensured continuing inequality of opportunity, poverty and powerlessness.e.  Their solution is to compete in offering caste-based reservations, not providing the equality of opportunity that might make caste irrelevant.a and ca, b and ec and db and c

Select the correct text in the passage.Which sentence from the text reveals the author's purpose for writing the text?(1) Studies have shown that there is a connection between food deserts, race, and policies since the 1930s. After the Agricultural Adjustment Act that came with the New Deal in 1933 in response to the Great Depression, there were limits on types of crops and livestock that farmers could raise and grow, which increased food prices. It is important to note that these high prices made it even harder for families who were already struggling to purchase food. During segregation, white middle class residents fled to the suburbs. With them came the supermarkets and healthy food options. Some say that businesses follow money and demand. . . .(2) There is a lot to unpack here. But there are people who are noticing this ugly web that keeps food deserts in existence. Part of Michelle Obama's "Let Move" campaign was to partner with large grocery chains to open locations in food deserts, providing access to healthy foods at affordable prices. If more people can share her thinking, imagine how differently the lives of over 19 million Americans can be. With more grocery stores caring about people over profits, more Americans can live healthier lives. More Americans living healthier lives means less strain on the American healthcare system. The residents that suffer just 15 miles away need a solution that they can champion since our city officials do not seem to care.(3) I reached out to a grassroots organization called Feed the Soul. They work with BIPOC communities to create food gardens without depending on the city officials who have neglected them. Feed the Soul sponsors work with community representatives to write grants, secure funds, and create a plan for the gardens. I invited sponsors out to tour the food desert with me. We met with the principals of the elementary and junior high schools, as well as managers of two apartment complexes near ideal garden spaces. The principals and managers loved the idea of creating community gardens. Within two months, we held school meetings, contacted city officials to legalize the use of four garden spaces, and posted gardening schedules on newly-formed community websites. Six months later, the gardening has started, and the community is excited. Retirees in the community are especially thrilled because they now get to stay active and bond with other members of the community, especially the children at the schools. Slowly but surely things are turning around for that community. My dream is that more gardens can pop up—whether they are community gardens or individual gardens on apartment patios or in backyards, they will allow residents to eat healthier and live longer.

Question No. 2Directions for questions 1 to 5: In each question, there are five sentences or parts of sentences that form a paragraph. Identify the sentence(s) or part(s) of sentence(s) that is/are correct in terms of grammar and usage. Then, choose the most appropriate option.a.  The bison was the largest and most plentiful of the mammals that competed for forageb.  with the settler's own domesticated cattle. However, other less conspicuous mammals,c.  Particularly the jack rabbits and the prairie dogs, also posed an economic threat – and they, too,d.  have been the object of unrelenting persecution. While rabbits and hares of one kind or another live all over the continent,e.  but of all of them, jack rabbits are the most characteristic of the prairies and plains.a, b and dc, d and eb, c and da and e

What is wrong with this example of a paragraph?Dieting is very common in our society. Susan Bordo writes about women and dieting. "Fiji is just one example. Until television was introduced in 1995, the islands had no reported cases of eating disorders. In 1998, three years after programs from the United States and Britain began broadcasting there, 62 percent of the girls surveyed reported dieting" (p. 149-50).Group of answer choicesThe topic sentence is vague.The date is missing in the source introduction.There is no interpretation of the source to show how it connects to the paper's main idea.All of these are problems with this paragraph and source integration.