Angel was unfamiliar with a few of the persuasive techniques we discussed and needed a bit of encouragement to use them. Her writing, while of excellent grammatical quality, could also be slightly livelier to impress an examiner. A small number of minor mistakes in her English cropped up. These would not affect the understanding of her intended meaning at all. Try to incorporate a fuller range of the persuasive techniques we discussed into your work. 用中文2句话总结以上内容

Angel is an excellent student with a positive communication attitude and is proficient in English, logically in expression. She is dedicated to her studies and also has a passion for art and music. She is very keen to be able to join a top British school like Canford for her Sixth Form study. We highly recommend this potential candidate and will soon register for her on the school's official website! 上述这段话用英语表达的更自然，连贯。可以适当添加连词

what are the persuasive techniques used in the text ?

It went well. I was assessing her reading comprehension skills. Zhaohan could read well, but her comprehension of certain words needs improvement for the IELTS. We can focus on improving this weakness. A key point for improvement rests on reading through a whole passage or paragraph without stopping on unknown or unfamiliar words. This will help Zhaohan better understand the wider meaning than specific words. She struggled with communication due to her limited vocabulary, but after assessing her I will use more simple language. She did try and engage in conversation and was better than other students I have had. 请用中文总结以上的内容

Which part of persuasive text that persuades the readers?AevidenceBcentral argumentC

Zhaohan main challenge continues to distil the texts which she reads in order to work out their meaning. That she continues with her IELTS practice, reading textual excerpts and summarising them in 4-5 sentences. This will be a specific focus of Zhaohan’s homework. 请用中文总结以上内容