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Dear Fiona I hope you are doing well! We have a student, Damon Mengzhe PAN would like to book 2 mock interview courses on the 6th and 8th Aug, 1 hour per session, he is available in any 1-hour slot between 11 am to 2 pm (UKT). could you please kindly confirm if you can teach Damon and provide your availability during this period. Here is some basic information about Damon : Name of students DoB Interview date Target Schools 1. Damon Mengzhe PAN 19 Oct 2013, the upcoming interview will be set on Mid-August Lockers Park, Sherborne Prep Damon从September 2023 就读英国的Horris Hill School,附件是他的school report,现在想要申请转学,Year 6 entry in Jan 2025,计划在8月中旬开始面试和笔试! 不是Horris Hill School让Damon退学,而是家长对学校有点失望了,希望转学。You can see from the report that teachers comment Damon is a valuable member of the class, who has good ability, is very keen to learn and absorb as much information as possible. French teacher says he has been impressed by his obvious motivation, hard work and determination in remembering, mastering and apply all his new vocabulary and grammar...However, tutor and headteacher also pointed out some 'behavioural concerns' about Damon, which indicates his inmature social skills. Honestly, although the Headmaster offered him one to one mentoring chance from Sep, the family are disappointed about the school's lack of effective support but took accusations from other English students without full assessing the facts. For example, Damon used 'fat' word to another Year 8 boy whoes parents complained to school and Damon received suspension as a result. However Damon didn't mean it and didn't understand the weight of English words. Now Damon feels isolated by other peers at school. If this continues, his parents are worried about his mental health and normal school life. They believe Damon is a simple, kind and innocent child who want to interact with others well but lacks of maturity and social skills at the moment. The family would like to move him to a more international students friendly school who recognises Damon's strength and weakness, and Damon can feel fully supported and cared there. Lockers Park和Sherborne Prep都非常关注Horris Hill报告里校长的评价,所以一定会很仔细地问Damon事情经过和他的态度,认知。此次的面试培训内容主要教Damon怎么更准确地表述事情经过和他的真实的想法和态度。如果有些不合适的表述,可以及时纠正他,告诉他如何表述更符合英国文化和语境,尤其是Unkind Words这一方面,基本大部分问题都是来自于社交方面的。 请用英文润色以上邮件。

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Dear Fiona

I hope you are doing well!

We have a student, Damon Mengzhe PAN would like to book 2 mock interview courses on the 6th and 8th Aug, 1 hour per session, he is available in any 1-hour slot between 11 am to 2 pm (UKT). could you please kindly confirm if you can teach Damon and provide your availability during this period.

Here is some basic information about Damon : Name of students DoB Interview date Target Schools

  1. Damon Mengzhe PAN 19 Oct 2013, the upcoming interview will be set on Mid-August Lockers Park, Sherborne Prep

Damon从September 2023 就读英国的Horris Hill School,附件是他的school report,现在想要申请转学,Year 6 entry in Jan 2025,计划在8月中旬开始面试和笔试!

不是Horris Hill School让Damon退学,而是家长对学校有点失望了,希望转学。You can see from the report that teachers comment Damon is a valuable member of the class, who has good ability, is very keen to learn and absorb as much information as possible. French teacher says he has been impressed by his obvious motivation, hard work and determination in remembering, mastering and apply all his new vocabulary and grammar...However, tutor and headteacher also pointed out some 'behavioural concerns' about Damon, which indicates his inmature social skills. Honestly, although the Headmaster offered him one to one mentoring chance from Sep, the family are disappointed about the school's lack of effective support but took accusations from other English students without full assessing the facts. For example, Damon used 'fat' word to another Year 8 boy whoes parents complained to school and Damon received suspension as a result. However Damon didn't mean it and didn't understand the weight of English words. Now Damon feels isolated by other peers at school. If this continues, his parents are worried about his mental health and normal school life. They believe Damon is a simple, kind and innocent child who want to interact with others well but lacks of maturity and social skills at the moment. The family would like to move him to a more international students friendly school who recognises Damon's strength and weakness, and Damon can feel fully supported and cared there.

Lockers Park和Sherborne Prep都非常关注Horris Hill报告里校长的评价,所以一定会很仔细地问Damon事情经过和他的态度,认知。此次的面试培训内容主要教Damon怎么更准确地表述事情经过和他的真实的想法和态度。如果有些不合适的表述,可以及时纠正他,告诉他如何表述更符合英国文化和语境,尤其是Unkind Words这一方面,基本大部分问题都是来自于社交方面的。

请用英文润色以上邮件。

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Dear Fiona,

I trust this message finds you well.

We have a student, Damon Mengzhe PAN, who is interested in booking two mock interview courses on the 6th and 8th of August. Each session will last for an hour, and he is available at any time between 11 am to 2 pm (UKT). Could you please confirm your availability to teach Damon during this period?

Here is some basic information about Damon: Name: Damon Mengzhe PAN Date of Birth: 19th October 2013 Interview Date: Mid-August Target Schools: Lockers Park, Sherborne Prep

Damon is currently studying at Horris Hill School in the UK and is set to start from September 2023. He is now looking to transfer schools for Year 6 entry in January 2025, with interviews and written tests planned for mid-August.

The decision to change schools is not due to any issues with Horris Hill School, but rather a disappointment from the parents' side. Damon's school report, attached, shows that he is a valuable member of the class, keen to learn and absorb as much information as possible. His French teacher has been impressed by his motivation, hard work, and determination. However, there have been some 'behavioural concerns' raised about Damon, indicating immature social skills. Despite the Headmaster offering one-to-one mentoring from September, the family feels the school has not provided effective support.

For instance, Damon used the word 'fat' to describe another Year 8 boy, which led to a complaint from the boy's parents and a subsequent suspension for Damon. The family feels that Damon did not understand the weight of his words and that the school did not fully assess the situation before taking action. Damon now feels isolated at school, and his parents are concerned about his mental health and overall school experience. They believe Damon is a kind and innocent child who wants to interact well with others but currently lacks maturity and social skills. They are looking for a school that is more international-student-friendly, recognizes Damon's strengths and weaknesses, and where Damon can feel fully supported and cared for.

Both Lockers Park and Sherborne Prep will pay close attention to the Headmaster's comments in the Horris Hill report. Therefore, the main focus of the mock interview training will be to teach Damon how to accurately describe the situation and express his true thoughts and attitudes. If there are any inappropriate expressions, we will correct him in time and teach him how to express himself in a way that is more in line with British culture and context, especially regarding unkind words. Most of the issues come from the social aspect.

I look forward to your response.

Best regards, [Your Name]

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Dear Luna Thank you. Mrs Briony Harris, our Senior Deputy Head can meet Damon on 20th August at 12.30pm. Please see invitation Zoom link below: Briony Harris is inviting you to a scheduled Zoom meeting. Join Zoom Meeting https://us05web.zoom.us/j/82561967585?pwd=BcHqeHbCzZDv5bUaXZ2aexTdIpadv4.1 Meeting ID: 825 6196 7585 Passcode: 8WKV8G With best wishes Anne 请用英文回复一下Anne, 先表达感谢,Damon会在20th August at 12.30pm 准时参加会议。

Dear Annie Thank you for your email and reminder, much appreciated. I confirm safe receipt of Damon's passport and look forward to receiving his school report from Horris Hill. The next steps in the admissions process are as follows: Register Damon by completing the registration form and paying £150 registration fee. Our bank details are here On receipt of the registration, we will arrange online assessments for Damon with Quest. This includes assessments in Maths, English, Verbal and Non-Verbal reasoning On completion of the online assessments, we will organise a zoom meeting with the Headmaster to meet with Damon and his family We will ask permission from the parents to request a reference from Horris Hill The Headmaster will review the assessment results, the school report, reference and meeting the family to decide on whether to offer a place I would suggest timings for the assessments to be completed by the end of August and the zoom meeting can be organised during the first two weeks of September. I look forward to hearing from you regarding registration. Please note I will be away from 25 July and return on 5 August, there is plenty of time to register and set up the online assessments before the end of August. I have copied in my colleague Rebecca Chaplin who is our new Head of Marketing and Admissions, we are both here intermittently during the holidays. Kind regards Claire 请用英文简洁的回复一下Claire,我们已经填好了注册表和支付注册费,请参考附件。请您回复确认查收!我们期待到注册进程的下一步!

Dear Luna Thank you for letting me know. So that we can ensure that an interviewer is available, it would be good to set a date now. Please could you let me know when might suit so that this can be arranged? Best wishes Anne 英文回复一下Anne的邮件,主要意思是: 抱歉晚回复了,Damon 在20th and 22th of August, between 11 am to 2 pm (UKT)的任意时间有空。

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Dear Annie Is there any way he could do it this week, on Wednesday at 9.30am or 10am? With staff being away, I cannot guarantee that I’ll have an interviewer available in mid-August, although we will, of course, do our best if Wednesday doesn’t suit him. Best wishes Anne 请用英文礼貌的回复一下Anne,感谢提供面试时间,只是这周周三会来不及,Damon最快也要在8月中旬才能参加面试呢。

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